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Magnusotls
01-19-2011, 02:13 AM
Until This set is done I will be introducing another card at least weekly. None of it is copyrighted; all art, designs, ideas and characters are from scratch created by myself for my fan set. If my wording is ever incorrect with the errata of the game, please correct me. Too much free time.

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab164/magnusotls1/Langdon-1.jpg?t=1295424461

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab164/magnusotls1/manganus4.jpg?t=1295682345

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab164/magnusotls1/NarrowConcentration.jpg?t=1295683671

RockStar
01-19-2011, 03:02 PM
First off, props for doing your own artwork; it doesn't suck (meaning, it looks very indie cool!).

I think his second ability should be broken down into two abilities, as you really are cramming a lot into it. Also, his abilities, in particular Chaos, generate a lot of momentum, so i think it could read something like this:

R Discard X momentum: Before you play an attack as a reversal, the control check to play the attack gets +X.

E Commit: Your attack played as a reversal gets +X speed and damage. X equals the total amount of momentum you've discarded this turn.

Magnusotls
01-22-2011, 02:10 AM
added two new cards. make all the anus jokes you want.

RockStar
01-22-2011, 10:01 AM
added two new cards. make all the anus jokes you want.

Incredible...You have Jesus Christ on a foundation!!!! Lol!

With re: Your character card...I like it. It is a bit strong, but since this is a "what-if-you-won-your-own-cardboard" design, it makes sense to be strong; nearly every champion card is. And, your abilities play to your symbol spread, which is very nice.

I'm not a fan of tokens, but that's just me.

Narrow Concentration...good design for a simple effect, and i think Void could use the speed reduction defense. Not sure that the other symbols do, however, and you might want to think about giving it a symbol other than Air or Order.

So far, so good! :)

Magnusotls
01-22-2011, 10:25 AM
^I'm going to be in Oakland for the apocalypse on may 21st dressed as jesus. (it is a self portrait).

Dillon
01-22-2011, 11:50 AM
http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab164/magnusotls1/NarrowConcentration.jpg?t=1295683671[/img]

wtf? did you take a picture of yourself or something?

Magnusotls
01-22-2011, 03:03 PM
f'in paintings, how do they work?